Scriblia – Writers Community | Olusanya Mariam | Activity https://scriblia.com/members/beta-briefing/activity/ Activity feed for Olusanya Mariam. Tue, 30 Jun 2026 15:51:23 +0000 https://buddypress.org/?v=2.14.4 en-US 30 hourly 2 a2cdf0ce1033e385e65ecdbbb3e82d15 Olusanya Mariam posted a new activity comment https://scriblia.com/news-feed/p/638/#acomment-646 Fri, 19 Jun 2026 19:32:23 +0000 Oh no problem

In reply to - მაქსიმე ხეტეშვილი posted an update

I’ve been working on a fantasy isekai novel for 3 and a half months, could yall please rate and give feedback on it? Im new to this app.

Novel: […]

]]> 36c155166f28e290f44cc74899bfb3d4 Olusanya Mariam posted an update: Hey writes, let's see your WIPI need manuscript to read […] https://scriblia.com/news-feed/p/644/ Fri, 19 Jun 2026 19:25:27 +0000 Hey writes, let’s see your WIP

I need manuscript to read and provide honest feedback

]]> 0 f79b28d68deb1cd3c1e8b46efdfe1951 Olusanya Mariam posted a new activity comment https://scriblia.com/news-feed/p/638/#acomment-643 Fri, 19 Jun 2026 19:21:58 +0000 You’re welcome.

If you don’t mind, can I read the whole manuscript and provide feedback?

In reply to - მაქსიმე ხეტეშვილი posted an update

I’ve been working on a fantasy isekai novel for 3 and a half months, could yall please rate and give feedback on it? Im new to this app.

Novel: […]

]]> 1d0ff55889c20a528285bef4605a0646 Olusanya Mariam posted a new activity comment https://scriblia.com/news-feed/p/638/#acomment-640 Fri, 19 Jun 2026 18:50:39 +0000 Interesting premise and I liked the dream sequence a lot. The mystery, the voice, and the restart mechanic hooked me more than the school scenes. I’d suggest tightening some of the repetition in the beginning and showing more of why people react negatively to Alex, but overall I’d keep reading to see where the story goes

In reply to - მაქსიმე ხეტეშვილი posted an update

I’ve been working on a fantasy isekai novel for 3 and a half months, could yall please rate and give feedback on it? Im new to this app.

Novel: […]

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