მაქსიმე ხეტეშვილი
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მაქსიმე ხეტეშვილი posted an update a week ago
a week ago (edited)
Have you guys been getting feedback from people that seem like they were written by Ai? They try to scam you by asking for money and in return they will write a document about feedback on your novel, but they are probably written by Ai.
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მაქსიმე ხეტეშვილი posted an update 2 weeks ago
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მაქსიმე ხეტეშვილი posted an update 2 months ago
Ive been working on this fantasy isekai novel for 4 months. Could yall give critique on it? (Only 2.1k words currently. Arc 3 and 4 is in progress)
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VvQvQ3lXqRKV5DYwHACYI0N2F3j9czXOfK4T9eJZKUM/edit?usp=drivesdk
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Endless Dreams Volume 1 Arc 1 Alex Voss A 16 year old boy named Alex Voss with short black hair and gray eyes climbed the stairs to the fourth floor in school. He reached the classroom door and pushed it … Continue reading
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Ohh that’s awesome
Would you love to share few chapters to beta read?
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მაქსიმე ხეტეშვილი posted an update 2 months ago
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მაქსიმე ხეტეშვილი posted an update 2 months ago
I’ve been working on a fantasy isekai novel for 3 and a half months, could yall please rate and give feedback on it? Im new to this app.
Novel: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VvQvQ3lXqRKV5DYwHACYI0N2F3j9czXOfK4T9eJZKUM/edit?usp=drivesdk
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Endless Dreams Volume 1 Arc 1 A Normal Day A 16 year old boy named Alex Voss with short black hair and gray eyes was going up the stairs to the fourth floor in school. He made it to the … Continue reading
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Arc 3 coming soon.
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Interesting premise and I liked the dream sequence a lot. The mystery, the voice, and the restart mechanic hooked me more than the school scenes. I’d suggest tightening some of the repetition in the beginning and showing more of why people react negatively to Alex, but overall I’d keep reading to see where the story goes
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