Bhakti DUA
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Hi i just read your story and I think that it was too long to a reader to reader…. I know many reader will find it nice but for a teenager it will be not….
But It was a nice one to start…
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I am currently developing a fantasy novel, but I am also working on a side project. I understand your point, but I intend to adapt this into a long-running manga, so it needs to be quite extensive.
By the way thanks for replying
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I would love to 👍🏻
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Bhakti DUA posted a new post. 4 months ago
The vampire who can't chooseLong ago, in a dark and silent town, there lived a vampire. His life was empty and lonely, just like every other vampire’s story. One…
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Overall i think you story line is very good. But you can choose some more more defiened words. I hope you will understand1
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I will let me to beta read your book1
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Bhakti DUA posted a new post. 5 months ago
AffectionThere was once a boy and a girl, both carefree and a little lost in their own worlds. They met by chance, not expecting anything,…
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Bhakti DUA posted an update 5 months ago
Hi! There, if you wanted to read my long novels you can check that out on web novel I only need your support and your feedbacks as I will be looking forward for that…
I hope you will like those also as my short stories…
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May i have it to read and give a feeddback ?
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Bhakti DUA posted an update 5 months ago
“I always wanted to say something, but I could never say it. I always wanted to do something, but I could never do it. Still, there is a hope that one day I will. After all, life is very long.” ✨
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Bhakti DUA posted a new post. 5 months ago
A girl...She was a quiet girl who went to school every day. People saw her, but no one really understood her feelings or emotions. Sometimes when…
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Bhakti DUA posted an update 5 months ago
Sometimes we want to express or share but due to something we can’t,that is called a life….
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Bhakti DUA posted a new post. 6 months ago
Lovers...There was a girl named Ayesha who fell in love with a boy in her college named Siddharth. They both loved each other deeply, but…
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Wow! I'm impressed 💯1- View 1 reply
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Bhakti DUA posted an update 6 months ago
"Everything is not for money something are for self satisfaction "
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Bhakti DUA posted an update 6 months ago
6 months ago (edited)
CHAPTER 1
Hi everyone! Today, I would love to share a short story about a girl named Ehsaas. She isn’t a real person in our world, but perhaps she could be—who knows? Ehsaas is the only girl in her world who suffers greatly under her orthodox family. She dreams of living her life freely and becoming a fashion designer, but her family’s rigid… Read more-
Hi there ! 👋 I am new over here please give me some response from your side and some feedback to enhance my writing because I have many stories like that which are out of this world
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It’s well written, seems like a synopsis of a great story I can wait to see what Ehsaas does with the freedom she craves and her brother encourages.
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