Scriblia – Writers Community | david reads | Activity https://scriblia.com/members/davidreads/activity/ Activity feed for david reads. Thu, 15 Oct 2026 06:03:02 +0000 https://buddypress.org/?v=2.14.4 en-US 30 hourly 2 3e7d28cc3f2dd2bb10d485fd7b5f65fb david reads posted an update: Hi l am a book editor I help authors take their […] https://scriblia.com/news-feed/p/819/ Wed, 23 Sep 2026 01:28:42 +0000 Hi l am a book editor
I help authors take their manuscripts from rough drafts to polished, reader-ready books. From structure, pacing, and character development to grammar, clarity, consistency, and sentence-level polish, I focus on the details that make a story stronger while keeping the author’s voice at the heart of the work.

]]> 0 de300542c9b93ded2adaa6b46491793e david reads posted a new activity comment https://scriblia.com/the-girl-who-was-different-from-us/#comment-154 Fri, 18 Sep 2026 14:18:16 +0000 ab700b452243c63374a9e8b8f12663e2 david reads posted a new activity comment https://scriblia.com/the-girl-who-was-different-from-us/#comment-151 Fri, 18 Sep 2026 11:51:57 +0000 2c4f91ba07866c8f15a52846ebc532a7 david reads posted a new activity comment https://scriblia.com/broken-pieces-chap-3/#comment-149 Sun, 13 Sep 2026 02:34:43 +0000 6e759abf80075c4f4bbe34a482307f38 david reads posted a new activity comment https://scriblia.com/austin-ridge/#comment-148 Sun, 13 Sep 2026 02:23:47 +0000 29301af1bd1eb3bd12b2d57e9784208e david reads posted a new activity comment https://scriblia.com/the-girl-who-was-different-from-us/#comment-147 Sun, 13 Sep 2026 02:20:56 +0000 5d49d82f70e282282c2f21bdda122df0 david reads posted a new activity comment https://scriblia.com/1188-2/#comment-146 Fri, 04 Sep 2026 14:22:34 +0000 e80106ea554bafc8553aac7c433e3cb0 david reads posted a new activity comment https://scriblia.com/love-by-chance/#comment-145 Fri, 04 Sep 2026 14:13:49 +0000 80792b6bceb96faeec0a3afc14c96a20 david reads posted an update: Authors, what are you working on right now? I’d love to […] https://scriblia.com/news-feed/p/785/ Fri, 04 Sep 2026 12:01:07 +0000 Authors, what are you working on right now?
I’d love to discover some new WIPs and hear what you’re creating.
Drop your genre, book title, or a little about your story below. I’m always interested in seeing what other writers are working on! Drop your genre, book title, or a little about your story below. I’m always interested in seeing what… Read more

]]> 2 c205d391e14c34f76e031950b11e0686 david reads posted a new activity comment https://scriblia.com/please-dont-look/#comment-144 Fri, 04 Sep 2026 03:10:34 +0000 a24a9bd19bfc70980a4c9ce5da43fb09 david reads posted a new activity comment https://scriblia.com/news-feed/p/694/#acomment-781 Fri, 04 Sep 2026 02:42:48 +0000 This hooked me right away. The barn feels genuinely unsettling, and Benny being only nine makes the tension even stronger. As a beta reader, I’d definitely keep reading to see what’s waiting for him in the dark.

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Brave Even In the Dark

The barn was cold and held a thick and heavy dark within it’s walls. There were uneven planks of ra, splintered wood that made up walls of the […]

]]> 1ab1e1e701458d0182d1ef5f5b93d802 david reads posted a new activity comment https://scriblia.com/news-feed/p/764/#acomment-780 Fri, 04 Sep 2026 02:35:31 +0000 Wow, 1,000 views! That’s amazing! You’re clearly doing something right. As a beta reader, I love discovering talented writers early and seeing how their stories develop. I’m really glad I found your work

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Hello everyone!!!! something new is cooking soon I will be posting that…. I know you guys miss me…

]]> fd557ae83c0b8003017b2d87540f6de2 david reads posted a new activity comment https://scriblia.com/news-feed/p/772/#acomment-779 Fri, 04 Sep 2026 02:21:24 +0000 Absolutely! I’m a beta reader, so honest feedback is actually what I’m here for. I’m happy to share my thoughts on what’s working and what could be stronger.

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Are you open to honest feedback on your writing

]]> 0cfc94264d86281e2fbaf71c91758907 david reads posted a new activity comment https://scriblia.com/broken-pieces/#comment-142 Thu, 03 Sep 2026 19:46:52 +0000 f7f8b1d21daa1052f983be3632721a59 david reads posted a new activity comment https://scriblia.com/the-hollow-valley/#comment-141 Thu, 03 Sep 2026 19:40:03 +0000 2d4c810869396d97c78973ccf9c0e544 david reads posted a new activity comment https://scriblia.com/cartoonist-smile/#comment-140 Thu, 03 Sep 2026 19:36:37 +0000 2171a269114e18af6d703452ea651611 david reads posted a new activity comment https://scriblia.com/the-dance-we-left-behind/#comment-139 Thu, 03 Sep 2026 19:33:09 +0000 d28a4739c84363686484ef8d88873f23 david reads posted an update: Hey writers,I'm offering beta reading and editing […] https://scriblia.com/news-feed/p/773/ Thu, 03 Sep 2026 14:04:55 +0000 Hey writers,

I’m offering beta reading and editing for manuscripts that need a fresh set of eyes.

As a beta reader, I’ll give you honest, kind feedback on:

  • Plot, pacing, and structure

  • Characters that feel real

  • Worldbuilding that works

  • What kept me reading and what didn’t

As an editor, I’ll polish your prose at the line level:

  • Grammar and…

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]]> 0 bbbff393d25df1fd65a7f651cacdd74a david reads: @skye Are you open to honest feedback on your writing https://scriblia.com/news-feed/p/772/ Thu, 03 Sep 2026 13:14:59 +0000 @skye

Are you open to honest feedback on your writing

]]> 1 8f063fc0bab2bc218b6b3e3447b1a6de david reads posted a new activity comment https://scriblia.com/love-under-the-stars/#comment-137 Thu, 03 Sep 2026 11:25:21 +0000 09d1e6f203ff0bf1d64ef717535d0d2d david reads posted a new activity comment https://scriblia.com/news-feed/p/748/#acomment-762 Wed, 02 Sep 2026 10:44:10 +0000 “You’re very welcome! I really enjoyed reading what you shared. If you’re open to it, I’d love to beta read more of the story and give you detailed feedback on things like pacing, character development, clarity, and overall flow. You can send the manuscript to my Gmail if that works for you.”

In reply to - david reads posted an update Hey everyone! I’m a big lover of books and I enjoy discovering new stories and giving honest, thoughtful feedback. If you’re currently working on a novel, short story, or new […] ]]> 11424677a158e7f73dfd844bffd03c8a david reads posted a new activity comment https://scriblia.com/sovereign-of-flame/#comment-136 Tue, 01 Sep 2026 03:45:03 +0000 27eb9e8b6dbb0d4628f2611430205b97 david reads posted a new activity comment https://scriblia.com/news-feed/p/748/#acomment-756 Tue, 01 Sep 2026 03:27:14 +0000 @egg0690 I just finished reading the chapter, and honestly, I found it really interesting. I like how you introduced Alex as a flawed and somewhat lonely character, because it gives the reader something to understand and explore about him. The transition from his normal school life into the strange dream world definitely caught my attention… Read more

In reply to - david reads posted an update Hey everyone! I’m a big lover of books and I enjoy discovering new stories and giving honest, thoughtful feedback. If you’re currently working on a novel, short story, or new […] ]]> b84bb678142bf2ddc10a941ae42de1d8 david reads posted a new activity comment https://scriblia.com/news-feed/p/707/#acomment-750 Thu, 27 Aug 2026 11:05:00 +0000 Writing
I think it’s great that you’re open to honest feedback and willing to improve. Writing takes a lot of courage, especially when you share your work with others. Don’t let self-doubt make you give up on something you care about. I’d be happy to check out your work and share some genuine feedback.

In reply to - Bhakti DUA posted an update Hi everyone! 👋
I wanted to ask for your honest opinions about my writing. I’ve been feeling a little confused and underconfident lately, and your feedback would really mean a lot […] ]]> def6debb26efe376d6e6ec9fac9f0286 david reads posted a new activity comment https://scriblia.com/news-feed/p/708/#acomment-749 Thu, 27 Aug 2026 11:01:28 +0000 This is such a sweet concept! I really like how their different tastes in books bring them closer together. The library setting also makes it feel cozy and fitting for their story. I’d love to see how their relationship develops!

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Ashaas loved getting lost in romance novels, while Neel could spend hours reading thrillers filled with mystery and suspense.

They first met in a quiet library when their eyes met […]

]]> be0b818a77562ad722f91473c55bf56a david reads posted an update: Hey everyone! I’m a big lover of books and I enjoy […] https://scriblia.com/news-feed/p/748/ Thu, 27 Aug 2026 03:18:56 +0000 Hey everyone! I’m a big lover of books and I enjoy discovering new stories and giving honest, thoughtful feedback.
If you’re currently working on a novel, short story, or new project and would like someone to read a few chapters and share their thoughts, feel free to reach out. I’d love to discover what you’re working on

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