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david reads posted an update
Hey everyone! I’m a big lover of books and I enjoy discovering new stories and giving honest, thoughtful feedback.
If you’re currently working on a novel, short story, or new project and would like someone to read a few chapters and share their thoughts, feel free to reach out. I’d love to discover what you’re working on5 Comments-
Been working on this for around 5 months so it might be bad: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VvQvQ3lXqRKV5DYwHACYI0N2F3j9czXOfK4T9eJZKUM/edit?usp=drivesdk
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@egg0690 I just finished reading the chapter, and honestly, I found it really interesting. I like how you introduced Alex as a flawed and somewhat lonely character, because it gives the reader something to understand and explore about him. The transition from his normal school life into the strange dream world definitely caught my attention too. There are a lot of questions that come up naturally—especially about the baby, the dreams, and what the different visions mean for Alex. I’d definitely be curious to see where you take the story from here. There’s a lot of potential in the concept.
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@davidreads tysm
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“You’re very welcome! I really enjoyed reading what you shared. If you’re open to it, I’d love to beta read more of the story and give you detailed feedback on things like pacing, character development, clarity, and overall flow. You can send the manuscript to my Gmail if that works for you.”
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@davidreads you’ve already seen the manuscript. It was the Google docs link I sent you
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